Tuesday, February 6, 2007

2/7 Descriptive Writing

In the story Fahrenheit 451 in the middle of the story I (Montag) was reported to a house and to find out it was my house that I had to burn down. It was unbelievable that I had to burn down my own house. This wasn’t the thing that I wanted to and now I’m thinking that why am I burning down someone elses’ house. I am starting to relize what I'm doing, and I going to try to change the way that I am. How knew that out of all houses my house had to be the one to be burnt down for me to relize that what I'm doing is wrong.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

The idea for this was pretty good, but I think you should add some more descriptive language. Maybe make it a bit longer too.

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